kanda

Name:kanda hanabishi (different from my first character)
Age: 20
Date of Birth:unknown
Gender:male
Race: hanyo bird tribe (half demon from the bird tribe)

Hobbies:cleaning, reading books, repairing broken down machinery.
Likes:birds, swords, books, peace, music
Dislikes:conflict, the word useless or cursed

Personality: a little shy, borderline withdrawn. kanda is the kind of person who puts friends first society last. due to his history of being abandoned, he has a an extreme hatred of the kind of people who just throws things away because they are not useful. often if he sees something thrown away, he would pick it up and take care of it. things that are like trash, he simply recycles it so it would be used again. anything broken he picks up he will fix it. because of this habit, he has developed some advance engineering skills and skills in repairing various objects despite how little he has had time to know of it because of constant repairing of various objects with complicated mechanisms.


Height: about 5'8"
Weight: around 160 lbs
Eye color: right eye red, left eye silver
Hair color: black (due to coloring it)
Hair Style:long in a single pony tail

Outfit:usually always wears a robe that completely covers his chest and back. but when he is not wearing a robe, his other outfit is a white suit matched with a cane
Extras: some throwing knives strapped to the upper thigh to his right and left legs
Appearance:he has pail skin due to the robe, and on his back in the case it is revealed, re reveals a pair of feathery wings that are often bonded so he doesn't expose them by reflex. his face is a little effeminate.
(for some reason, i am unable to upload a picture, so this description is the beast i could do)

Ability: mastery of mana based fighting styles, master swordsman of the flash god style.
explanation: the mana based fighting styles is just using mana to enhance his over all strength in various situations. the use the mana in its pure form to strengthen the muscles and the joints. and when applied to the skin, it increases its resistance to help with defending. the ability is limited to only to his biological body that has nervs. meaning things like hair or the feathers on his wings do not do anything. asides from applying it to the nerv system.

to help understand the application if he uses it on his wings while in flight, and a person would launch a large attack at him and uses his wings to help distribute the force to lower its over all attack power, the attack will still affect the feathers and most likely peal or pluck them off which is even painful for kanda regardless and if it was strong enough to pluck off a large amount of feathers, it can alter his flight patterns to force him to crash.

>> explanation on abilities/skills will follow ... hopefully <<

History: because of his hanyo heritage, he was looked down upon in the bird tribe, and was looked upon with malice from the humans. his mother was a demon from the bird tribe, while his father was a simple peasant. because of their union his mother was banned from the tribe, and his father was exiled from his village. so they moved from village to village, despite their constant moving, kanda was app as he spent time with his parents. but one day in their temporary home, a mob of humans with extreme anti demon issues raided their home, killed his parents, and burned all their belongings, they only knew of the couples and not of their child, so kanda was the only one to survive as he was out in a lake bathing. only to saw his house being burned, but not by who. thus he has no hatred for the humans. but because he only saw hos house burning he does not know if his parents were alive only considering the the possibility that they abandoned him due to his mother being a bird tribe demon being strong enough to defend her self and his father. but unknown to him was that when she was banished from her tribe, her abilities were sealed.
as kanda roamed around, he was picked up by a swordsman and trained in the god cry swords style, the man that picked him up was traveling around looking for a successor to his sword style wishing it would survive in the age of mana.
the reason why he does not know his birthday is because his tribe didn't believe in celebrating the anniversary of their birth as it only represents the amount of time lost in their life.
Weapons: a katana and several throwing knives
class/level:A class

chi is not a power explained or in common use around here so before i can even begin to judge this you need to explain it in more detail, also the sword style has no specifics, is it based on speed? power? does it have both? and if it is just a sword style it isn;t an ability but a skill

I just upgraded your post so one can properly read it. Other than that, still require your explanation on ability.

Ability: mastery of chi based fighting styles, master swordsman of the flash god style.

explenation: the chi based fighting styles is just using mana to enhance his over all streanth in various situations through the transformation of his mana/chi into weak electronic pulses in his nerv system to transmit signals at a higher speed, and the use the mana in its pure form to strengthen the muscles and the joints. and when applied to the skin, it increases its resistance to help with defending. the ability is limited to only t his bilogical body that has nervs. meaning things like hair or the feathers on his wings do not do anything. asides from applying it to the nerv system, he can increase his power of transforming mana/chi into electricity of a higher voltage to the point it can easily stun a person for a large amount of time. or even transform his sword into an electro magnet easily able to redirect any bullets in any direction to his sword or any weapon made of iron or any other material known to hold an electrical charge and become a magnet. to help defend his allies

to help understand the application if he uses it on his wings while in flight, and a person would launch a large attack at him and uses his wings to help distribute the force to lower its over all attack power, the attack will still affect the feathers and most likely peal them off which is even painful for kanda regardless and if strong enough can alter his flight patterns to force him to crash.

alright, lets sum it up.

a) using mana to enhance his over all strength
b) mana in its pure form to strengthen the muscles and the joints
c) applied to the skin, it increases its resistance to help with defending
d) can increase his power of transforming mana/chi into electricity of a higher voltage to the point it can easily stun a person for a large amount of time.

e)to help understand the application if he uses it on his wings while in flight, and a person would launch a large attack at him and uses his wings to help distribute the force to lower its over all attack power, the attack will still affect the feathers and most likely peal them off which is even painful for kanda regardless and if strong enough can alter his flight patterns to force him to crash.

not off to analyzing it:
a) pure form mana does not usualy exist inside the body, i get the strengthening part but Ki is not equal to Mana. they're diffrent things, Ki can actually be obtained by any human being through training.

b) as already answered in a), the joints and muscles arent strengthened by magic, but by contraction and special moving techniques (such as Xing letting the arm rotate while striking).

c) basic muscle contraction, no mana needed.

d) a body cannot create such a high electrical charge, Chi is the energy of the body and not magic. And that is beside the fact electricity control would be another ability.

e) I totally dont get what you're trying to explain.

its to help avoid any confusion in the future, i apologize if it is unnecessary, but it was how i was raised. so is my application approved or not

fine, you get your [approved]

but just to be sure, your abilities are only:

- strengthen body (defense/attack/speed) through mana
- electric charge

Graveyard till he's deleted.